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Sketch for CrimsonForest by nightofthewolves Sketch for CrimsonForest by nightofthewolves
For ~CrimsonForest

I'm requesting critiques because I want to know how I did on the background. Please tell me how to improve.

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WhiteExterior Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a pretty awesome background if you ask me. :)
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nightofthewolves Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks^^ It took forever to get it at least somewhat right^^;
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CrimsonForest Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Allright. Turned out quite nice!

One thing that stands out the most that needs to be fixed would be the wolf's right leg needs to be more 'defined'. It's sort of squished into its side, and needs to be 'out' a bit more, away from the body. Considering the angle, the line that shows the top of the head should be more... at the base of the ears, perhaps. The symettery (sp?) of the face, it's good, but seems a little little bit.. off. The muzzle, considering the angle of the eyes should be facing more of (your) right. (But then, I'm not any good at symettery either.) The whole background itself. It's good, but sort of like it's all angled to a round loop towards the corner that the wolf is in, and it gives the viewer a confused tilt... Hard to explain, but I see it a lot in drawings. Even my old drawings I'll notice it.

I would say the only thing you need now is more detail and color! ^^ My fav.
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Overall, great drawing!
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nightofthewolves Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks^^ Glad you liked it. Since this was just a sketch I didn't color it or make it perfect, but thanks for the tips! I'll let you know if I ever feel like finishing it^^
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CrimsonForest Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Np. :iconimhappyplz:
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RadioactiveArcade Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student General Artist
Cute~ Nice sketch, keep up the originality :meow:
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nightofthewolves Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thankies:tighthug:
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RadioactiveArcade Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student General Artist
My pleasure~
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